The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the wise words and character of 'Grandma' it was just wonderful, especially her words at the end, it made this more real for me. ^_^
Very nice - the characters' emotions come through your writing well. There are some minor punctuation glitches, but they are easily fixed. The the story moves along nicely and I love the ending.