The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/08
This is lovely, and your description of stopping on the drive was fabulous.

Your transition at the end to your own home threw me a little. I think the Uncle Dewey piece was the meat of the article and certainly could have been the main subject.

Great descriptions and very heartwarming! Excellent work!
04/26/08
Beautiful descriptions and such a poignant piece. Very well done!
04/26/08
Beautiful descriptions and such a poignant piece. Very well done!