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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Easter (05/30/05)
E very child giggles and grins when they see what the easter bunny has left for them.

A ll knees should bow on this day that happened for all of humanity.

S tars align to shine brighter than any other day of the year.

T estimonies of loved ones enrich and instill hope in those around.

E agles cannot soar high enough to reach where our creator is.

R eal Easter is made up of spending time in awe and fascination that the Lord rose His only Son Jesus from the dead to cleanse all our sins and to let the world know that he can do all things.
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Debra Bowers
06/07/05
"Very Sweet" Wish you had continued to the end in poem form and maybe made it a little longer. I enjoyed it though and hope to see more of your writing.
Lynda Lee Schab 
06/08/05
Good concept. I don't know if it was long enough to be considered for a placing, however. Perhaps you could have included MORNING after Easter to give it more.
Thanks for posting.
Blessings, Lynda
LINDA GERMAIN 
06/09/05
Adding "M-O-R-N-I-N-G" is a good idea to meet the minimum word count and give a little more substance. You are headed in the right direction though.I liked what I read.
dub W
06/09/05
Using letter signals is a fun way to express feelings and thoughts. You are well on your way to something really nice. Add a little and you are there.
Shari Armstrong 
06/10/05
I enjoyed reading this - I like the acrostic form.
Val Clark
06/11/05
Short and profoundly simple. Love the picture of the stars. Keep posting.