The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/08
Great story! I like Renny! I love how you showed his morning routine and then followed him throughout his day. Great job! The only thing I would mention is that you really should capitalize Word when talking about the Bible. Also, when Sharon is talking about what the doctor's said, that threw me. You need to reword it as Sharon telling Renny instead of the doctor's quotes. I love this story! A great example for all to follow, me especially:)
Laury
02/10/08
What Laury said! LOL Seriously, good story, good show of your characters, not just telling. Keep writing!
02/13/08
Great story. Keep writing.
03/11/08
I am not a writer but I sure enjoyed your article. Good example of what we are all supposed to do. GOD BLESS YOU.