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Topic: Illustrate the meaning of “All that Glitters is Not Gold” (without using the actual phrase or literal example). (01/24/08)
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TITLE: I was hoping to show off! | Previous Challenge Entry
By lydia kasumba
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The next morning I’m in shock as I meet rhapsody on my way to work.
Immediately I remember my first impression of him
Shy; not bad looking; friendly; intelligent; educated; walks with GOD? Or religious? I’m not sure but I was not convinced by his cell leadership or his praying in tongues; not a very open and easygoing guy; perhaps a bit imbalanced with all his church church and more church activities.
He had left a question mark of curiosity in my mind and yet not quite captivating my attention.
I got in first and he sat next to me
We said our hellos and I then I continued the conversation offering compliments for the New Year
Then he asked me what I’m doing Saturday
My female instincts tell me that he likes me but perhaps he doesn’t know how to approach me
But I could be wrong
He may just want to evangelize me instead to get me to be the next member of his church
I don’t know
I guess time will tell but the question I’m asking myself is whether or not I should bother to give him that time.
Am I starring at the man that would be my husband? Or is this another distraction?
And what’s more, what disturbs me is the fact that I like him and yet he doesn’t fit what I asked God for.
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Laury
Watch your use of semicolons--in most places where you have them, commas would be more correct.
I like the voice of this little piece.