The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/08
In my opinion, this is squarely on topic! I loved it.You went right to the heart of the matter. Excellent message~
01/22/08
A poem!
The title fits well, but the mechanics of the poetry is irregular and hard to follow.
Good thoughts...keep writing.
While not generally a fan of free verse, I loved this beautiful and convicting poem. I also like how you shifted from the Bible to God being the "I Am Here." The use of repetition was very effective.