The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
Very nicely on topic. It's always good to have someone else read through to find grammatical errors or mis-spelled words.

The last two paragraphs make this into an excellent devotional.
01/11/08
Good object lesson.

I caught "ridged" instead of "rigid" and a few other edit-able errors.

Good job with this week's topic.
01/12/08
In a former life I used to work for Landscape Company. I had been to college and was drilled into checking oil and cleaning filters every time I started a machine. It used to save him money!

A good illustration.
01/12/08
Yes, problems don't go away by ignoring them.
It's easier for the reader if you put an extra space between paragraphs.
Keep writing.