The Official Writing Challenge
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If this is based on a true story, wow, I'm so glad you made it through. I kept waiting to hear you say "Thank you On*Star" LOL. Good story.
06/02/07
How exciting!

Consider breaking the large paragraphs into shorter, more digestible chunks, and choosing a title that does not give away your exciting ending.

Wonderful story.
I am glad you are okay. Nice story.
Wonderful account of the hand of God in a situation.
06/06/07
This certainly fits the adventure genre! What an experience! You write well, keeping the reader glued to your words.
What a marvelous adventure. It really seems like God sent you an angel. Well done.