The Official Writing Challenge
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A good way to show that you hold the keys to your salvation. Very well written.
05/07/07
Encouraging words, well-received.

Try to avoid using familiar phrases (like "you are the apple of his eye"). People tend to gloss over the familiar, but their eyes are drawn to interesting, new word combinations.

Thanks for this heartfelt poem!