The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/06
Great message - and so true! Tighten up your meter a bit and this would be even better!
Thanks for sharing!
09/18/06
this is very true for me, too! A very timely reminder!
A little choppy-try to 'smooth it out' by reading aloud and counting the pauses. See if your voice follows/conveys the cadence you want the Poem to carry.
Good job though-a very true lesson we can all relate to.