The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This was very interesting! Good job.
08/18/06
interesting take on the topic. Very creative
08/18/06
Very good, one of the best in this level.
Excellent. I could think of several young ladies I would love to read this.
08/20/06
I really enjoyed this. It says so much about today. Nice job!
08/22/06
I predict you won't be in the beginners for long.


Well done!
This is good. Your rhythm is good, the message is clear. A very true picture of life as we have come to know it without God.
08/23/06
This was very good. I particularly liked the way you structured it like a psalm. I winced at the word "whore" but it did have the intended impact.