The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/06
This was very moving to me - I could feel exactly what she was going through. You have some wonderful, wonderful stanzas here - too many to mention! Love the one about kissing every cheek, and several others! Wonderful job!
08/07/06
also liked the part about kissing cheeks. Great job!