The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/05
A delightful, well-written story!
I agree this is a delightful story. You must be proud of your grandpa.
03/15/05
good example of bartering.
You let the reader feel the patience of the grandpa as he bartered and let us see him through this six year old's eyes. I could just see the young child not saying a word, watching the grandpa!
03/16/05
I love antique shopping. I think I could learn a thing or two from your dear old grandpa! Nice story. :) Joanne
03/16/05
Very enjoyable. Well done.
03/16/05
Very Good! This will keep you reading it's so good.