The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/06
Was the victim a boy or a girl? you moved from boy to girl repeatedly in this story.

Strong premise, child aubse must be so hard to work with in the medical field, and with work this piece can really stand out.
08/05/06
Such a worthy topic. "He had robbed her of her very soul. He had stolen her abillity to respond, even to love." Powerful summary. Great piece. She is blessed to have your prayers. Father pays great attention to them.
08/09/06
A very moving piece. It was briefly confusing about the children (you spole of the six year old boy, then siad 'Her name was...', but I think it became clear after that. Good, powerful writing.