The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed reading your article. I'm a huge reader of the Reminisce magazine and this article reminded of the many stories I've read of the good ol' days.

One minor thing, it would be a lot easier to have a space between the paragraphs. It just makes it easier to read.

Other than that, I really enjoyed it.
These stories are historical classics. What a joy to hear how wonderful old families worked together, sang together, laughed together.
You've done a really good job here. Your writing was so vivid I could see it in my mind's eye asa I read. I guess the purists would say it needed some tension, some story to resolve without losing anything of the atmosphere and descricption you have built. But I loved it as it was.