The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your poem. Great truths in it.
A message that needs to be heard! Is yours the church of Jesus Christ or a social club? The religious hypocrites rejected Jesus then and still do now.
I found myself reading this with a hip hop rhythm and it took on more power and punch! the church can do the most favoritism of any branch or organization. Your voice here for the average person was strong and ended with the message loud and clear