The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/05
Well done! Very well written and you got your point across in a striking way.
03/08/05
I'm not sure I got the point and I'm wondering why. The reader has no idea what she was accused of and while it's not that important, we do need a sense of "why". I am thinking maybe two more paragraphs to lead and end with would have helped me. But what I did get and admire was the character herself. Her willingness to not be defeated; to constantly look for God's guidance under hurt.
03/14/05
Crista,

I enjoyed this piece. It has much potential!

Blessings,

Cheri