The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/06
Great take on the theme and an immediate interest-grabber, especially for women - few of us can resist shoes! The application was nicely done. Good job.
07/31/06
Very clever take on the theme! This definitely held my interest. Super work!
08/01/06
This was great, very well written. Great take on the topic, and great execution.

I could see this in a devotional book, and I thought your writing even had a bit of the "chicklit" feel to it, if that is something you are interested in. Great voice.
08/01/06
Not only was this piece enlightening, but also entertaining. One small suggestion, try not to have that many "I's" begin your paragraphs. It's a difficult task in a first person story NOT to have an "I"...but there are ways to get around it. I loved this story! Thanks for sharing.