The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/06
Wow - what an ordeal you've been through! Would have loved to hear more directly how God helped you through it. He truly IS a very present help in trouble, isn't he?
07/31/06
You related your experience very well. Some work on punctuation and a touch of proofreading for typo's would make it better.
07/31/06
Thank you for sharing your story. I enjoyed reading about your experience.