The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/06
Very good read, though, I must admit, I wasn't quite sure of the connection between the neighborhood and her decision. Thanks for sharing!!
You've written this really well but like Joanne I was left wondering about the reference to this other neighbourhood. It really left me wondering what profound insight came to you there. Keep writing - I liked your style.
07/31/06
I really enjoyed your walk. Your writing style made your thoughts seem very real and believable. Thanks for sharing your story!
This is good. I like the inner comment to yourself, it is you right? It sounds like a true account from your past.
You have a way of bringing the image of your imagination to life. Keep writing