The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/06
The Balance Act is an exceptional work of poetry. I believe it professes the work of our Lord in a way that any one can understand. Thank you for letting me read and comment on this article.
07/29/06
Great message here! A little work on the rhyme and meter, and some typos and such would improve it greatly. Thanks so much!
08/02/06
The message is good. The poetry is rough.