The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/06
A very haunting tale. The ending was very effective. I enjoyed this "walk" very much!
A well written story with good suspense and dialogue. Keep writing!
This is very well written with just enough suspense to keep you reading to the end. Keep writing
Creepy and thought provoking. I can't wait to see who wrote this one.
08/01/06
A riviting story. As a mother I can relate to this prompting of the spirit to pray for my children. Good job.
08/01/06
Being a mom of four daughters, I can relate to this story. Thanks for sharing this story of prayer and the walk with Jesus!
08/01/06
Definitely spooky, and such a testimony to prayer. You kept my interest throughout!