The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a delight to read. Watch words that sound alike but are spelled differently, and have a different meaning. You have the cadence of this down very well. I have never seen a three line poem before. Very different. Keep writing
07/28/06
I have never developed an appreciation for poetry but I really enjoyed this piece. There are a couple of misspells you may want to correct if you publish this elsewhere. "See" should be "sea" and "head" should be "heard." Keep up the good work!
07/28/06
Not much of a poetry person, but I really enjoyed this - it flowed quite nicely, and other than the spelling errors mentioned before, I couldn't really find any suggestions for you! Nice job!