The Official Writing Challenge
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Awesome. You have a gift that makes it very clear to see what is taking place. I could see a correlation here between what you wrote and the book of Song of Solomon when she rose from her bed to find her lover gone. Very good. Keep writing.
07/27/06
Beautiful expression. I could "feel" it. Nice work.
07/28/06
Very compelling - I could feel everything you were writing. Excellent!
Hi there! I enjoyed your article; sounds like a poem! I think we've all been at this place. If we draw neigh to God, He will draw nigh to US! Thanks.
07/30/06
Thanks for showing me how to involve the senses. I thank God for leading me to this website to see the talent that others have. It is humbling, but necessary if I want to grow as a writer. Thank you for being one of those people that I can learn from. It was a very beautiful, emotional piece and, in the end, gave me images to feel closer to God.
This is absolutely beautiful. I love it. I like the tone of your writing, you address God as a lover. I like the application of some literary devices e.g Paragrapg 4: "The quite that surrounds me is deafening" - this quite ironical. Thumbs up!
This is absolutely beautiful. I love it. I like the tone of your writing, you address God as a lover. I like the application of some literary devices e.g Paragrapg 4: "The quiet that surrounds me is deafening" - this quite ironical. Thumbs up!