The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/05
You chose a very good example to show favoritism with Jacob and Esau. Then, the contrast with God's favor toward us. One thing that stood out to me was the word "favoritism" repeated too many times in the beginning of your story
It's hard to not overuse a word when we are trying to define it. but I think your story line does it for you and the word could occasionally be omitted. I thought you went full circle with this idea and gave the reader a sense of how it harms but also how it has always been with us since the beginning of time. Good read