The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/06
I like the hope this conveys. At then end, you have one sentence where is should be two. Other than that, I didn't catch any errors.
07/22/06
This was a touching recounting of a personal event. I liked how you said her body was "empty." Yes, it is sad and happy. I loved the version at the end. "Don't get cozy in it," indeed!
07/25/06
A touching story, softly told. Well done.