The Official Writing Challenge
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A great start. I ended up wanting to read more.
07/22/06
What a great reminder that even today without the breath of God in our bodies, we would not have life. This is a great between the lines, in depth view of how excited God must have been to bring to fulfilment His dream of creating someone that he could call friend. I only saw one, maybe two typos, but other than that good writing! Thanks for sharing.
07/23/06
Great job - very engaging description. I agree - I wanted more!!
07/24/06
Wonderful imagery, and I also wanted more. This is delightful.
07/24/06
Very lovely and serene. I enjoyed this a great deal.
07/25/06
Where's the rest? How dare you serve me such a small portion of such a fragrant and tasteful dish.
Very good job. I love seeing what I'm reading (imagery wise, lol).
"Can I have some more please."
God Bless!!
Ok! Ok! Everybody I will add to this little aventure.

Thanks everyone for your encouraging comments.
Patricia, this is such a lovely piece indeed! So many wonderful images. I felt I was right there! Beautiful!
07/26/06
Beautiful imagery that captured my attention and gave me a glimpse of the Creator's passionate love for His creation. Nice work! :)
Beautiful job, bueatifully written. Loved it.
08/06/06
We can't appreciate the glory of God's creation without the breath of His life in us. Imagine how many people there are who are walking around like Adam without soul, unable to truly see and experience all that God has, both in the physical world and the spiritual world. Good job, Patricia.