The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/05
I so wanted this to carry on so I could find out what happens! Great!
03/07/05
excellant short story plot. Descriptive, and entertaining. You let the reader draw their own conclusions... Interesting perspectve.
I loved this. It truly shows the consequences of favouritism
Another chilling read! Of course it just me think why in the world do we leave loaded guns around! But after I got beyond that, I liked the fact you let us draw our own conclusions.