The Official Writing Challenge
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Great piece! I wanted it to continue. One of my favorites.
07/21/06
Very interesting. And a rather scary prospect! Since it is set so far in the future, I had a little probelm with there still being limos, mikes, and cameras. I think the futeristic setting would be enhanced if you somehow came up with new ways of transportaion and communication. That may just be me though. Good job over all. I enjoyed it.
Wow! Very creative and I loved the ending, leaving us to wonder where he is. Good job!
Tis is a wow job! are you sure you belong to the beginner's class? Anyway, thats left for the judges to decide. Please check paragragh 19,I think it should be "the barrage seemed to become too much..."
This is is a wow job! are you sure you belong to the beginner's class? Anyway, thats left for the judges to decide. Please check paragragh 19,I think it should be "the barrage seemed to become too much..."
You def have the makings of a sci-fi writer.
Awesome! One of my favorites was highly commended! Way to Write!

Blessings as you continue to write for the glory of HIM!
08/01/06
The year 2058 drew me right in to find out what might be happening in the world, long after my own death. I especially liked the short circuiting of the Doctor. This was an easy read, inticing me to finish it.