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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Soul (07/13/06)

TITLE: Dance With Me
By Gale BROWN
07/18/06


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Come and dance with me, freely as you have not a care in the world. Give yourself freely to me, holding nothing back. I can give you comfort and lead you in the right direction. Please surrender love to me.

Come out and dance with me, put your trust totaly in me. Let me hold your hand and lead the way. I need you to believe in me as I see so much in you.

Come on dance with me, let your spirit soar and be complete. I love to dance and I would love to dance with you. Don't be afraid or shy for I can calm all of your fears. I love you and I'll always be with you.

I know that you have been hurt in the past, but I would not harm you. I know that you have done things I would not have approved of; butI am forgiving and will never hold your past against you.

Come and dance to a song I made just for you. The dance will loose you from your past and put confident in your heart.

I know that your soul wants to dance but your body doesn't move. This is an invitation from your Father, to dance. Your soul wants to express itself, but your mind has talked you out of it. Jesus has freed you from all , so come and dance with me.


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Helen Murray07/21/06
Loved that line, "your soul wants to dance but your body doesn't move." How true that is of our culture. This is a great call to be who we are without fear.
Joanne Sher 07/22/06
This is beautiful - so poetic! I almost felt like I was reading a poem in prose form (this is a good thing!!). Love your imagery.