The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/06
Frightening. You hear stories like this from time to time, just enough to know they are true. It is a fearful thing to fall into the hands of the living God.
It's a story that needs telling. Great work!
07/21/06
Quite Sobering! Thanks for the reminder that all that glitters is not gold.
07/21/06
You conversations within the story are amazing. Through it you feel very connected to your characters. Great job!
07/23/06
A sobering story. Your dialgoue is great and seems to reflect the pace of Gordon's lifestyle, too. Really well written...
07/23/06
Wow! One of my favorites so far. Hope it places.
07/26/06
WOW! Powerful! Makes you stop and reflect.