The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/06
This was a very honest expression. Thank you for sharing. You ministered your point. I don't know the nuts and bolts of poetry or free verse, but I enjoyed reading what your heart had to say. God Bless!!
07/26/06
Never mind that the rhyme and metered flow wasn't there...the Heart and Soul was! And that's what is important. You spoke your heart, the truth and you did your best. Good job.