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I loved the way this main character describes his family and his feelings towards wild and reckless Joey. You brought the feelings of the parents into it and let them have the strongest voice. I loved this story and felt like the ending lesson was one many families need to read.
Many persons would empathize with Matthew, but well-meaning Christians would respond like the parents. Matthew, however, has become aware that he was being too judgemental about Joey and has now seen the "light". Good story, well written.
Great story with a new perspective on the perceived favorite. Remember the prodigal's brother?