The Official Writing Challenge
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This was deep and intense! You packed a whole lot in 750wds!

When you write a paragraph with dialogue in it there is no need to separate it, keep it as one.
It is great to see you dealing with the harsh realities that many people have to face. A gospel for the broken hearted is so important because the world is full of broken hearts.
Our God is a jealous God and HE will have no other gods before HIM! Though that is a very painful lesson to learn, once realized NOTHING is able to rip pieces from our hearts ever again!