The Official Writing Challenge
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This was deep and intense! You packed a whole lot in 750wds!

When you write a paragraph with dialogue in it there is no need to separate it, keep it as one.
07/14/06
It is great to see you dealing with the harsh realities that many people have to face. A gospel for the broken hearted is so important because the world is full of broken hearts.
Our God is a jealous God and HE will have no other gods before HIM! Though that is a very painful lesson to learn, once realized NOTHING is able to rip pieces from our hearts ever again!