The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/06
I like this. It's a good uplifting poem. Thanks.
07/17/06
I like the use of past tense here--unusual in this type of poem. Tweak the meter a bit to make this a top-notch verse!
07/17/06
A beautiful expression of a worshipping heart.
07/17/06
Your rhythm and rhyme "feel" like "Halleluia!" That is a unique gift, to make the form of your poem part of the message. I like your work, here.
07/17/06
Worship of the King, beautiful!
07/17/06
wonderful expression of worship alone with your God. A little work on the rhythm would make this an excellent piece.
07/18/06
Joyful indeed. My favorite line: "I surrender my heart...I let him begin." Good job.
good job. Keep writing
07/21/06
These words flow so nicely. Lovely job.

-Andrea:)