The Official Writing Challenge
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Sounds like you've come to know our GREAT God through some personal trials! Your piece would be so much easier on the eyes with some paragraph breaks:)
07/17/06
You have a very effective use of repetition with the "He is..." statements. Consider making each of those the beginning sentence of a paragraph which expands on each attribute.
07/17/06
You've got some great imagery in here! Wonderful message too!
07/17/06
Beautiful!
Amen! Keep writing. Would have had much more impact with paragraph breaks and white space