The Official Writing Challenge
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What a neat and novel idea!A simple story of sharing our GREAT God with another and then "sending" the message to perhaps change yet another life!
Now, this is the kind of message I like to see! Because you have included real-life people, your exposition of this Scripture reads like a parable. I especially like the ending, where the two women apply what they have studied in a creative outreach. Good job!
Neat idea, definitely!! I love "listening in" on the women's discussion, and watching them give their thoughts wings.
When I was serving as a CE Director in Toronto, we did the "message-in-the-balloon" thing (before it got to be illegal!) and got replies back from as far as Tennessee! It's a terrific idea and this was a terrifically written story.
Very creative, and a joy to read.
Congrats on your win Tracey!
First place---Wow! CONGRATULATIONS, Tracey! You're on your way.
p.s. ...and it's your first faithwriters' entry. Double WOW & CONGRATULATIONS! And, welcome to Faithwriters. You certainly entered with a big splash!