The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/06
What a neat and novel idea!A simple story of sharing our GREAT God with another and then "sending" the message to perhaps change yet another life!
07/16/06
Now, this is the kind of message I like to see! Because you have included real-life people, your exposition of this Scripture reads like a parable. I especially like the ending, where the two women apply what they have studied in a creative outreach. Good job!
07/17/06
Neat idea, definitely!! I love "listening in" on the women's discussion, and watching them give their thoughts wings.
07/17/06
When I was serving as a CE Director in Toronto, we did the "message-in-the-balloon" thing (before it got to be illegal!) and got replies back from as far as Tennessee! It's a terrific idea and this was a terrifically written story.
07/18/06
Very creative, and a joy to read.
07/20/06
Congrats on your win Tracey!
07/20/06
First place---Wow! CONGRATULATIONS, Tracey! You're on your way.
07/20/06
p.s. ...and it's your first faithwriters' entry. Double WOW & CONGRATULATIONS! And, welcome to Faithwriters. You certainly entered with a big splash!