The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/06
Thank you for reminding us that Jesus is Great because of what he did for us. I think it is prefered now to pick a gender and not use "him/her" references. If you are use the conjunction in between (him or her) since "him/her" is not actually part of the English grammar.
07/17/06
I like the writing style here--it's a piece that begs to be read aloud, with dramatic emaphasis. Very nice. (I agree about the him/her. Your opening sentence would be much stronger with a quick re-write).
07/17/06
Powerful piece. Good job.
07/17/06
A wonderful read - I enjoyed seeing all the examples of your point, which drew us to Jesus himself.
07/20/06
Strong reminder of how great Jesus is and what he did for us.