The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/06
Interesting. The gift of invisibility. I like how you made him think he was doing something great when he tried to break James out of jail, but it really wasn't. Makes ya think about the stuff you do that you think is great-maybe they're really not all that good after all!
07/16/06
Very creative, using this gift of invisibility. Calvin learnt a lesson about dishonesty and cheating from James that led him to a path of being saved. Good effort.