The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/06
A nice entry. A little white space between paragraphs would have made it easier to read. Keep up the good work.
07/13/06
What a lovely memory! I enjoyed it very much.
07/13/06
You had an extremely wise mother! A very nice tribute to her and a good description of your feelings through this period of your life.
it's wonderful to have a mother that is so cherished. Great, heart felt story.
WOW, What a touching story so well remembered and shared with grace! Thank you for that glimpse into such tenderness in your family life.
Beautiful, the tears are still falling. Need some white space between paragraphs otherwise I see nothing wrong with this.
07/17/06
Great memory, I'm sure. Nice job of building up to the climax! I was wondering what the "bonus" would be all the way through!