The Official Writing Challenge
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Good lesson here! You drew an apt analogy with the closet theme!

Your opening would have some nice punch if you began with the second sentence: "I could not comprehend my bossís request; it looked to be a waste of time." That way, you draw your reader in emotionally right from the start. Then you can creatively build the setting.

Have fun and keep writing!
Very nice. Good comparison of a closet to our souls. Nicely done :)