The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful meditation, very deep and thoughtful! I love this: "He breathed the breath of life into his creation and it opened
its eyes and stared into the glory before it." What a scene! You might want to develop it into more of a dramatic story sometime.

(Hint: to make for easier online reading, it's suggested that we all use a space between paragraphs, rather than format in a solid body of text. Some of us elderly folks with trifocals will thank you for it!) Great stuff, keep writing!