The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This is gorgeous free verse. No need to clutter it up with the introductory paragraph...That just gets in the way here. Perhaps in another piece you could examine your experience in more of a prose style; but this stands alone, oustanding. Every stanza contains a powerful image, painted in short, graceful strokes that make the reader want to read it again and again. That's what really good poetry does; a reader can taste it, like fine chocolate. Bravo!