The Official Writing Challenge
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06/23/06
I love the alliteration! Great lesson on feeding ourselves with the positive things in life in order to be happy.
Wonderfully creative--a whole garden-ful of redemptive verse! Very clever alliteration and imagery. I like the "stone of stupidity" that turned the tide--nice touch to a beautiful poem.
This is wonderfully creative. Good job.
I'm not a poet so I can't critique but I am a reader and this was such a treat.

Blessings!
Trina<><