The Official Writing Challenge
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06/26/06
Ah, yes, the challenge of drive-thru intercoms and learing to control our tempers. Watch use of words (quiet and quite).
I think we can all relate to this story. Try showing your characters feelings through action rather than telling us what she's feeling. Good job.
06/26/06
Your unusual title made me wonder what I would find, here. But, your story is a delightful slice of everyday life with all its woes and surprises. You are on your way to higher levels, I'm sure :)
What a delight to read. I agree with Sharon...if you need help in this area there is a wonderful bk out there, "Words You Thought You Knew..." by Jeanna Glatzer. What a life saver it has been for me. A wonderful resource. Also, watch your spacing in your title. Every little thing counts. Keep writing!

Blessings,
Trina