The Official Writing Challenge
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06/26/06
Good message in this. Interesting use of questions and statements. Nicely done.
I loved this. You asked the question, gave illustrations, and answered it so clearly. Well done.
06/26/06
At the end of the day it comes down to the Creator and His love for the creation. Thanks for this piece.
06/26/06
My favorite line, "Life is simply enjoying God in everything that fills your day." This is a wonderful reminder to bring God into everything we do. He is there anyway. Wonderful!
06/26/06
Great poem! I loved the pattern and the alliteration at the end of each stanza. I wish you'd put an alliteration at the very end as well, to keep it consistent, but that's my only little complaint. This is a very strong entry!

(I just remembered that this is in Beginners, too. Wow! A very strong entry indeed!)