The Official Writing Challenge
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Good message in this. Interesting use of questions and statements. Nicely done.
I loved this. You asked the question, gave illustrations, and answered it so clearly. Well done.
At the end of the day it comes down to the Creator and His love for the creation. Thanks for this piece.
My favorite line, "Life is simply enjoying God in everything that fills your day." This is a wonderful reminder to bring God into everything we do. He is there anyway. Wonderful!
Great poem! I loved the pattern and the alliteration at the end of each stanza. I wish you'd put an alliteration at the very end as well, to keep it consistent, but that's my only little complaint. This is a very strong entry!

(I just remembered that this is in Beginners, too. Wow! A very strong entry indeed!)