The Official Writing Challenge
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Complete dependence on Him is what life is truly all about.
Good testimony, and great message! I like the last line about beginning at the Cross.

One of the things we all deal with as we're learning is those pesky dialogue tags. You know: "he said, she said" type of thing. You can make dialogue sparkle by giving each quote its own paragraph. If you need to, insert little references to what the speaker is doing, or a facial expression, to clue in the reader regarding who's speaking. This will move your dialogues forward and keep the reader's focus.

Good entry--keep writing!
06/26/06
Good testimony with hope throughout. (I think you mean the cars were "repossessed?")