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TITLE: When Seasons | Previous Challenge Entry
By Jason Sanders
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It is hard to find
meaning, in this
life, when everything
you know fades away.
So what is good? It is serving
You, Lord, for I know You will
never fade away.
Seasons change, people
go away. But You stay
the same, and I can count
You. I do not know, where
my life will go, but even
though, seasons change, I
can count on You.
I had a best friend,
more like a brother.
We said we would always
sing praise, to the Lord,
forever. I rarely see him
now, we do not have much
to say. Like so many people
in life we have went our
separate ways.
Seasons change, people
go away, but You Eternal
One, stay the same, and
I can count on You.
I don't know,
where my life will go,
and even though,
the seasons change
I can count on You.
I can count on You.
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"You will
never fade away...even though,
the seasons change
I can count on You."
To make your poetry stronger, try avoiding commas where a normal sentence wouldn't have one. "Even though / the seasons change / I can count on You." Or, "I don't know /
where my life will go..."
Nice entry, written straight from your heart!