The Official Writing Challenge
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I see some good thoughts here that could be betterc developed. Proof for spelling errors before submitting - is instead of id, and there's another but I can't see it at the moment. Blessings.
Oooops better! 'In it’s various' should be 'In its various' common error. My spirit stains - strains ? I think there are some great thoughts here that could be developed further! Blessings.
I like the way you are showing the connection between life and water. It's almost like a teaser for more that is to come. I think you can probably develop this into a very thought provoking or even teaching article. Your last paragraph is almost poetic. You could also consider creating a poem from these ideas...keep up the good work.