The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely story of a new life in Christ. Blessings.
Wonderful job! You have a great style that sparkles with strong verbs, and moves the reader along beautifully.

The stanzas of Amazing Grace, inserted between the vignettes of two girls just having fun sharing His life together, was superbly creative and tied the whole theme together. I loved the ending, where the "lead me home" line is punctuated by their symbolic 'splash-baptism' in the lakewater.

One suggestion: use your Spellchecker, and edit carefully for typos before submitting. (The judges look at those things!) You're on your way up--keep writing!
Very good. It kept my interest from first word to last. Keep writing.
06/26/06
This is really cute. As Sherry noted there are a few spelling fixes "altar" instead of "alter" and a bit of grammar to work on, but this is a delightful article.
This is probably one of the best on this whole level. Keep writing whoever you are it's VERY GOOD!